Hi! Welcome to my illustration blog! My name is Tracey Wright and i am in my 3rd Year at Plymouth University studying.. you guessed it- illustration. Enjoy the blog, comments much appreciated!
Nice work Tracey, I think the second one is better its much cleaner and easier to read. Id change your contact details to bold to keep within the style you've established, and unbold your date of birth since its not really important information. The speech bubble could be a bit bigger as well, generally try to avoid cropping so close to text. Hope that helps, really like the self portraits :)
Thanks Chris, they're not self portraits though- i cheated- just photoshopped photos! The new and improved version is now up, (i kept to the same image as it was a better shape to work with) :)